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The same happens here on SH. Earned myself a couple of 1-stars after I called out a few AI stories.

Is this a hot take? I just think it sucks drippy balls. Whenever I'm taking a dip, it feels like swan diving into a cluster fuck of...

The reason I stay here is to interact with fellow writers (and perhaps readers) and discuss creative writing. I'm not against...

I think the RR forum can be a little hostile and toxic. It's also full of Shoutout/Review beggars and overall beggars. On the other...

Why did you add huge breaks between paragraphs in the middle for no reason? Also, sometimes you begin paragraphs with a break, but...

1. You don't have a signature. 2. Ban evading can get your account banned as far as I know. Just make sure you don't break the rules...

Just to be the mean spoilsport again. By now, everyone knows what I'm trying to say, so I'll spare you the drama this time.

Image is nice. Desperately wanted to find something to tear it apart, but it's a very cool image. The more important part is how you...

It's totally not a genre I'd ever read but it's quite interesting. However you switch between present and past tense... or I'm just...

First off... there is way too much going on here that requires what those of us in the TTRPG community would call "DM-Fiat" to work...

Well, you already have a clear vision of the story, and it looks like you thought this through. Not like I agree, but hey, it's YOUR...

Their shields are so strong, NOTHING on Planet Earth, including HP spells, could break them. You could literally enter the jumper and...

Roflmao, you just got enough firepower, mobility, and defenses to blow up a fucking fleet with at least twenty to thirty motherships...

Images are too small. You have to zoom in like crazy to see anything. Also, not wanting to shatter your dream... who the hell wants...

Terrible. You could never turn this into a story without suffering through literal hell. So niche, so specific, so hard to write...