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Just a couple of things: The use of — is a sign, but when I started out it was all the rage, and I got used to it. I only recently...

Yes, he is obviously not among those whom I was talking about and knows how to write and how to argue properly, which makes his use of...

Uhm... you more or less already admitted it. Really, I don't see the use in arguing about it. So I won't "prove" how your story is AI...

Not willing to be mean or even criticize you, but you constantly grace AI stories with 100-1000-word reviews. I always feel so bad...

another mirai comic page this time there's not much twist

Just check out a bunch of other stories on this site. That should answer almost all your questions and make it obvious what you need to...

suzumiya haruhi sketch

i used the official art for this one

:sweating_profusely: I'm gonna steal this pose.

Still need lots of touch for complex background, but not bad i guess.

A cold lie. No way do YOU write that way. The paragraph structure, the unnatural choice of words. This is not how a translation works...

We need a new category for AI story feedback. Seeing so many people give extensive feedback to AI stories always pisses me off...

These titles are irrelevant and nobody, especially not readers, gives a fuck if the story they are reading is written by an "author, or...

Plot is good, writing is good enough; overall, this has the makings of a great story. The only reason I see this story flopping is that...