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Though I am personally not interested in BL, you gotta appreciate the effort put into this contest. If anyone is interested, they...

Pretty good. Maybe the narration could use a tiny bit of improvement. Usually, the narrator can accurately describe things. Which is...

Since it's only editing and you actually completed them, in my opinion, you can't really abandon them. It's nice that you'll still...

Congratulations. You achieved something great.

Charles, I think your standard is the standard of normal (classical) fantasy authors. This is a place for webnovels. Nobody, and I...

Yeah, most readers don't bother with the Author section ;) This reads a little like Main Character Syndrome.

Heh, you people are all amateurs... pathetic! I don't even have to ask myself that question because when I started writing, I was such...

Honestly, peak character design. Really awesome to look at. The art itself is also quite good-looking.

Tell us what you plan on revising. Why do you want to revise it? What are you struggling with? This just feels like a "Read my story"...

Sorry, totally unreadable in my opinion. You need to study basic grammar, maybe download a tool like Grammarly. You comma's are...

Well, it's possible to fail to captivate impatient, casual readers. My advice: Choose a central conflict in the chapter that piques the...

Hellow people. My first chapter is 3.3k words long, and I'm concerned it doesn't work because the "hook" is pretty much at the end. What...

I don't see the risk. Generally, you want your first chapter to be a bit longer and, as you said, contain a hook to draw in the reader...

Why do you create a Reader Poll in the Author section? I don't want to bitch, but there is a Reader section.

You can do anything, not like there are rules to follow. Though as a reader, I would get annoyed and confused, but if it's just for...