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How and how strongly does the feeling of empathy resonate in you when the hero falls? Like this - smack and into a pancake. I laugh... -
God damn, somebody help me. I can't keep speaking. God... I'm busting a gut. You're good. @foxes Thank you for poking fun at me. :blob_aww:
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Ah, fuck... you responded too soon after I had two shots of vodka. Alright, let's do this. I can only know everything I think, so...
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foxes replied to the thread What's wrong?.Okay, Earthman, I think I get it. I'll tell them that watching Charlie Chaplin's cut-out fall usually doesn't make your hair stand on...
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Empathy doesn't echo in a vacuum. :blob_blank: What you've got going on is a description of physical sensation, and it's pretty damn...
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foxes replied to the thread What's wrong?.I mean, no goosebumps. You just think you know everything, right? I was still thinking about the feeling. Everyone has their own hero...
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It's strange. When you write a post and people respond to it and discuss it, everything is fine. It seems like you can relax a bit after...
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foxes replied to the thread Writing [Tutorial] Objective Correlative (The Core Tool of Show, Don't Tell).I would rather think about what led the writer to such a dilemma. Perhaps the problem is not in this text, but in what came before it...
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Exactly. Moderation is key. I have a guide about that too. This also applies to every concepts in writing... -
foxes reacted to Macha's post in the thread Writing [Tutorial] Objective Correlative (The Core Tool of Show, Don't Tell) with Like.
Alright, so you know that writing rule "show, don't tell"? There's a fancy term for the best tool to do that called the Objective...
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foxes replied to the thread Writing [Tutorial] Objective Correlative (The Core Tool of Show, Don't Tell).Without a character's perspective or even a hint of their perception, it's just a "dead" description. If there's no better option, I...
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foxes reacted to Representing_Tromba's post in the thread What do you look for in a "relatable" main character? with Like.
I think I understand. Though I think I expressed my questions poorly. I don't mean for the character to be a boring cookie cutter, or...
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foxes replied to the thread What do you look for in a "relatable" main character?.I have a suspicion that all this is going to come down to a discussion of "how to write an interesting story". Well, who knows? On the...
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Depends on what they do with the oppressed elves. If they start a kingdom you could say. This 500 Year Old Elf Doesn't Want To Be...
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foxes reacted to Macha's post in the thread What do you look for in a "relatable" main character? with Like.
That would make me get bored of reading so fast. I don't want every main characters of all the stories I read to be like Tomie. Why...