Recent content by Fallow_

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Hey, I read the opening chapter of your isesekai novel. First, your cover is genuinely strong and eye-catching, and your synopsis is even better. It actually builds curiosity and sets the tone properly. The title, I’m a bit mixed on. (Its bad) Now for the hook itself. You’re doing a lot right...

Strong hook. Bit concerned the reader doesn’t get a choice anymore. Alright, I’m gonna be honest with you. First off, the cover isn’t doing you any favors. It just doesn’t grab attention. Same with the title and synopsis, they’re not bad, but they feel pretty average, nothing that really...

Not quite the kind of hook I had in mind, but I respect the enthusiasm 😅

Hey, I’ve been thinking a lot about story openings, especially how quickly a reader decides whether to continue or drop something. With attention spans getting shorter, I want to focus specifically on hook strength, particularly in the first 5–6 lines, and then how the rest of the chapter...

I was specifically hunting for some ADHD-flavored feedback on my novel… and somehow, you spawned. Check out my novel. 🥺 https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2277510/i-grant-systems-but-i-cant-cultivate/

Hey, I’ve been thinking a lot about story openings, especially how quickly a reader decides whether to continue or drop something. With attention spans getting shorter, I want to focus specifically on hook strength, particularly in the first 5–6 lines, and then how the rest of the chapter...

Okay, I read your first feedback… and I won’t lie, that was a little terrifying. Brutal might be the right word. That said, I’ve decided (very bravely, I might add) to trust my work and my life choices, so here I am anyway. Dropping my story into the fire. Be gentle… or don’t, I guess 😅 (Not...

I think you’ve got a strong core idea here, and that’s honestly the hardest part to get right. The stat-based farming angle has real appeal, and I can easily see it working well. Also, your title is good, I’d say it already does a fair bit of work in attracting attention. That said, the...