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Thanks😄
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I'm sorry if my post is unrelated, but I want to say, your profile picture is neat, i like it! :blob_hide:
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lol thank you very much!! the book was originally a joke on isekai as a genre, full of drama, and tragedy, and oops doesnt matter...
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If you want to be scarred forever: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1636840/my-little-sister-the-dark-lord/ If you want something...
Today at 6:17 PM
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Hey, I read the opening chapter of your isesekai novel. First, your cover is genuinely strong and eye-catching, and your synopsis is...
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I left the 5-6 fishing lines out so you could rate the hook without any other context.
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I'm in the process of revising my first few chapters, so what's on the site is still pretty much the one I wrote a year ago. But I feel...
Today at 2:49 PM
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Strong hook. Bit concerned the reader doesn’t get a choice anymore. Alright, I’m gonna be honest with you. First off, the cover isn’t...
Today at 2:26 PM
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Not quite the kind of hook I had in mind, but I respect the enthusiasm 😅
Today at 2:15 PM
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Hey, I’ve been thinking a lot about story openings, especially how quickly a reader decides whether to continue or drop something...
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ADHD feedback for your chapters
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I was specifically hunting for some ADHD-flavored feedback on my novel… and somehow, you spawned. Check out my novel. 🥺...
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Hey, I’ve been thinking a lot about story openings, especially how quickly a reader decides whether to continue or drop something...
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Feedback From A Delusional Witchpire [5/5] (Slots currently filled: Closed until further notice)
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Okay, I read your first feedback… and I won’t lie, that was a little terrifying. Brutal might be the right word. That said, I’ve...
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I've read three of your chapters. My general impression is that your chapters tend to be expository (telling) with the narrator...
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