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Thanks😄

I'm sorry if my post is unrelated, but I want to say, your profile picture is neat, i like it! :blob_hide:

lol thank you very much!! the book was originally a joke on isekai as a genre, full of drama, and tragedy, and oops doesnt matter...

If you want to be scarred forever: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1636840/my-little-sister-the-dark-lord/ If you want something...

Hey, I read the opening chapter of your isesekai novel. First, your cover is genuinely strong and eye-catching, and your synopsis is...

I left the 5-6 fishing lines out so you could rate the hook without any other context.

I'm in the process of revising my first few chapters, so what's on the site is still pretty much the one I wrote a year ago. But I feel...

Strong hook. Bit concerned the reader doesn’t get a choice anymore. Alright, I’m gonna be honest with you. First off, the cover isn’t...

Not quite the kind of hook I had in mind, but I respect the enthusiasm 😅

Hey, I’ve been thinking a lot about story openings, especially how quickly a reader decides whether to continue or drop something...

I was specifically hunting for some ADHD-flavored feedback on my novel… and somehow, you spawned. Check out my novel. 🥺...

Hey, I’ve been thinking a lot about story openings, especially how quickly a reader decides whether to continue or drop something...

Okay, I read your first feedback… and I won’t lie, that was a little terrifying. Brutal might be the right word. That said, I’ve...

I've read three of your chapters. My general impression is that your chapters tend to be expository (telling) with the narrator...