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This is Fairemont, reporting for 25 Eyewiteness news: Faire and balanced. Recent updates have shed new light on the case involving...

Well, you're in luck, because they are bound by the sisterhood of magical girlness!

This is Fairemont, reporting for 25 Eyewitness news: Faire and Balanced. In a shocking turn of events, attorneys have delivered notice...

Well, you still do a good job at it. :blob_aww:

If you have the ability to do so, print it out. If not, slap it into word, google docs, or anything else with a highlighter feature, and...

@Mellohwa See? I'm way ahead of my readers. :blob_shade:

I sort of skimmed the first chapter originally and wasn't certain if I wanted to leave any feedback or not, but I do think the biggest...

Then you just check the glossary or the post-chapter glossaries for their hanzi, which you can slap into a dictionary or browser of your...

You give good foodbacks. Er, feedbacks. :blob_aww:

After all, it is the only complaint any of my readers have so far. "Chinese names make my brain hurt" kind of stuff. Which is...

Well, if that is the case, then make good use of Eldoria's advice and my example to refine your writing and bring forth the improvement...

I think you are underestimating yourself. You don't know how good it sounds, I can see my book being infinitely better than what it is...

I've been doing this forever, so I have a lot of practice. Don't copy that word-for-word, though. The second paragraph I wrote is...

They do, but they also don't. They might not hurt me as bad if I was writing traditional Xianxia content, as people would expect them...

I agree with most of what @Eldoria has to say. You can cut that description down quite a bit. For example: A draconic berserker, whose...