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I believe that connecting these two sentences with something like "while" would work nicely since their actions are intertwined. This...

I was trying to consider the best way to go about it. I figured maybe a tournament a la Records of Ragnorak and such. Itd be the easiest...

Joyager does bring up a good point. Establishing a bit more of the mood would help. However, we might be missing a lot of that preceding...

I kind of want to collect like 6-12 protagonists from various SH users and run them through a gauntlet of challenges and deadly foes in...

Maybe? I don't think its bad. I'd say you have nothing to worry about. After all, I don't read anything that is bad. :blob_aww:

It doesn't seem to bother people that much, so I doubt that is necessary.

Your writing is good, @Assurbanipal_II. I like the story set up (I've read two chapters so far), but its taking forever to get going! I...

You will continue to be tempted so long as you enjoyed the story enough to read more when I get around to writing it. :blob_happy:

We're safe as long as they are on the other side of the glass. :blob_sweat:

@Envylope and @Anemic_Vampire drooling at The Bleed

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There is a balance between minimalistic approach to snappy action and leaving it a little too threadbare. You don't want to add much...

Its really long, and I am a lazy reader (also extremely picky), but I'll poke at it and read a few chapters. Maybe a lot more if it...

I like how the denizens of ScribbleHub talk about Tony as if he is a low-tier, benevolent deity that is well-liked, but afforded only a...

It might. You have several, though. Which one is your favorite?