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Reading The Peach of Petalik. To start off, I don't really see the point in the author's note. It gives no information that isn't in...

Oh my God at long last somebody sort of liked the cover a little Thanks for the feedback, one day I'll figure out how to make Chapter 1...

The moment I clicked your link and saw your cover, I laughed… Okay, let me recover and I’ll give you my feedback later. * Alrightttt...

Yeah i was going for something like that. I broke it up by chronological occurrence and tried to code it as “PoP” for readers to find...

I've set out to review this, but I need to ask you first, where do I even start reading from? The first two chapters I read are...

That's a lot further than I thought you'd read. I think you're the first person to say the dad is their favorite, lol. No occult stuff...

On chapter 10* as of now. Sophia's dad is my favorite of the sidecast definitely As for the wolf, my best guess is that he's a former...

This is a slice-of-life comedy about an overpowered dad who tackles parenting dilemmas with excessive force...

Hey, bro, I know you might be a bit busy now, but could you please read my novel when you have time...

I always find myself forgetting to give my thoughts on the synopsis and cover image, so I'll write this first. Cover art is neat...

Well, perhaps you could consider FGD after you've completed your fiction writing project. I mean, your book is already written, and now...

That's probably a good idea, but random people on the internet are also a solid resource I think. If I'm lucky, they'll give me a nice...

Honestly... if you really want constructive feedback, holding a focus group discussion (FGD) is more worth considering than picking up...

First impression: The synopsis is long, but it did give me a general idea about your work. From the start, I could tell you are...

Neat feedback thread Idk if my story is gripping enough for even an average attention span, but I will make an attempt. Only four...