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More than anything, I would like to make someone else feel something. If I could make even one person feel the way I have felt reading...

Thank you so much! There is more character depth later on but I do agree that it it needs some more descriptive meat.

Probably for it to be someone's favorite story, that'd be great

I like the cover art. Getting into the story, we're met with a really fast paced prologue. I think I'd complain that it was too fast...

Take care of your health... you can review when you have free time.

I'm a little busy rn, but I'll be free soon and I'll tend to a few more. I'm still alive

I mean, might as well. :blob_reach: Level Up – To Break All Limits I Have | Scribble Hub

Could you take a look at mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2089332/maybe-my-high-school-life-wont-be-so-bad-after-all/

Thank you. In general, this is an original analysis. The first chapters, of course, need to be revised. As does the entire story. This...

Here is the promised feedback: To start with the synopsis, it's pretty good I'd say. It does its job in giving a good idea about what...

I'm reading foxes' work now, after which I'll get to as much as I can Reading Princess Possession. The synopsis is okay. I feel like...

Here's three chapters of my newest work, The Secret Lives of Magical Girls. In google docs rather than published. Not that far yet...

Dude, you're awesome at reading random stories that don't even necessarily fit your preferences. I wouldn't do that—I just review...

TSR: Mountain Mover | Scribble Hub Posting long fight chapter to finish intro and show power system today or tomorrow

I’d take feedback on either of these if you would be so kind. Both take place in the same world but are quite different. The first stars...