Recent content by expentio

I liked Skip and Loafer also, in terms of comedy "You and I are Polar opposites" is nice. Also, also, in terms of great comedy, I can recommend Sword Art Online Abridged. They turned those two characters into total variants sociopaths, which makes their developing relationship pretty fascinating.

Usually, if something that should've been obvious gets me by surprise. Like, you know how a character is, you know about their habits, and then, during a completely mundane situation, where you completely forgot about certain peculiarities, the absurdity strikes hard, as the character behaves...

Now I'm asking myself where my own Eldritch goddess would row herself in there.

I usually try to maintain a degree of casualness in conversations. Of course, it depends on the situation, but discussions are never merely about information exchange. Don't just infodump the topic, but show their personal stance towards the situation. Include personal comments, patterns of...

I liked how in Core .001 the catgirl used qatars. Looked like a nice complementation to the natural features. Also, a rather elegant weapon. Yet in terms of effectiveness, I'd say halberd.

I'm currently working on one (at least, I think that's the right word). It's supposed to be a series of short story about a kind of transformed angels, and their respective origins, within a world I already established in another story.

Depending on the console version, you'll only have limited memory space. Also, the battery runs dry fast the more demanding the game. Also, also, the display is still limited by its size. I definitely recommend classic isometric RPGs, like maybe Pathfinder, or Warhammer Rogue Trader, where the...

"Perhaps". I know, not an uncommon word, but I barely ever use it in my stories, and feel like I'm missing out.

I find that sometimes the changes aren't outright about wrong phrases. Quite often I have a word at a special spot for emphasis. Or if a character uses slang. Grammarly corrects those away anyway.

To be fair, I like the "announcement" layout left from it more design-wise.

It helps me to have different stories and write what I situationally feel more inclined to. Also, you can manipulate your taste a bit if you are doing something you associate with your story. Or in my case, one of my stories, which opens up the range of what you might feel like doing. For...

Usually, 1500-2000 is recommended. Less and it appears a bit short to wait for. More and one misses out on exposure for appearing on the starting page with the new chapter more regularly.

Power you don't want, while a transformation into a monster doesn't mean you become a monster in mind. Characters are, mildly put, inconvenienced by receiving power that goes far above what humans can obtain. (And this should be repeated three times over)

Personally, I think if the main focus of the story is some form of conflict, then a power fantasy is kinda bad. There are no stakes if they can just bulldoze everything. No need for conformity. Nothing they have to answer for, as they're essentially god. Also, I can't help but roll my eyes...

I guess my take on the non-human transformation genre? My protagonists are humans who turn into certain kinds of monsters. Yet at their core, they are the people they were before, without any adjustment. They need to deal with being most foreign creatures in body, as well as society. So I'm...