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Hi, second chapter of this fantasy original story is already up. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1520133-valiant-phantasm/chapter/1595573/ I would appreciate any feedback, hope you enjoy it.

@StoneInky I'm glad you liked the start directly to the point, I had some exposition it was relatively important but it felt forced to put it at the very first chapter, so it probably will end up in the future second chapter. I'm glad you liked Naga too, she is a fun character too write, and...

Posted recently fist chapter of this original story, its a fantasy adventure, glad with any feedback I can get

Would you tell me what do you think of my story? Its just first chapter by now, here. It's going to be mostly a fantasy adventure novel with some action and comedy elements.

Could you tell me what you think of my story: Valiant Phantasm It's just first chapter by now.

It's name is Valiant Phantasm. A fantasy story and one of the first original things Ive written in a long while. So I'm really happy about it and wishing to know what you think about it.

My first chapter is purely for meeting the characters, the plot doesnt kick until later. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/244424-valiant-phantasm/chapter/254222/

Well. To be "realistic", zombie apocalypse just cant happen at all. Simply because dead people naturally rots. So if you just trap yourself in a place with enough food for a couple of weeks, the zombie will just rot and rot away until they get so feeble they wont even be able to walk and be a...

Okay... Ill be blunt. If that wall of text is your synopsis, just delete everything but the first five lines. All the rest can go on the author notes of the first chapter. Having it all on the synopsis t's overwhelming. So please dont. Okay, in my case my synopsis is a bit too short. But my...

Oh, I head a lot of critiques like that. Aparently the interface is difficult and most popular stories are in the same vein than Twilight. So if you dont post romance stories for women you wont get much attention.

Hmm, I looked at the terms of some of other sites I found, as CreativeNovels and Moonquill, which offer a certain revenue for views through a non-exclusive license and keeping your rights to your story. This part call my attention, though, "By providing Content to the Service, you grant to...

Dead in what sense? It didn't look like that to me

I'm curious about what other websites for original stories are out there. I'm writing something and want to post it in as much sites as I can, but I know must sites have a focus. Here, I saw a lot of Isekai and fantasy stuff, simmilar on Royal Road aparently. In wattpad is mainly romance and YA...

So must of the time you dont use internal thoughts in the strict sense. But simply leave the narrator explain what the character is thinking/feeling.

I'm a bit curious about the way of writting and fomatting internal thoughts you use as writters, or those you prefer as readers. Created a little poll so you can vote, and tell me, why do you prefer that method? Considering theres kinda four possible options. Use italics for thoughts, so...