Recent content by Empire145

Thank you for your detailed feedback. I will definitely incorporate some of your suggestions, particularly those concerning logic and dialogue. Your points have also highlighted some cultural differences for me, especially regarding the priorities in character development versus plot design...

I acknowledge your surprise, but in fact, this situation didn't last long; he quickly broke free and regained his freedom. This wasn't an attempt to create a passive protagonist, but rather a compromise stemming from a logical issue. Obviously, a normal villain would shackle their summoned...

Yes, sir. But in fact, Fiona isn't the protagonist; the protagonist is Albrecht, but he's clearly in a passive position. Under Gurga's surveillance, he can't take much action, so I had to use Fiona to provide a moving perspective. Fiona is more like an announcer. The core of the first six...

dude.I saw it, and I can only say it's a pity. However, thank you for your help anyway.

Sir, I am incredibly grateful for your interest in my novel. It might be a somewhat peculiar work, not only because it has a slightly translated feel, but also because it adheres to a fog of information and a limited perspective. Therefore, I won't tell you many things directly, but don't worry...

Okay, thank you for your feedback. Since this is a translation, it might sound a little strange, but no one told me that. Maybe I should check my vocabular…

I'm not sure if you'll read all the chapters, as it's quite a task. But if you'd like, please read the novel, even though it's a translation. This is an introduction:A wrong ritual, a returning ghost, a belated conquest.This is not merely a story about power, but rather a questioning of legal...

If you have the time, please try reading my novel. Since my English isn't very good, I used a translation tool; I hope this won't disrupt your reading experience.https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2120645/empire/

I'm not sure if this perfectly fits your criteria, but perhaps you could try reading my novel. It's low fantasy, historical, but set in a fantasy world resembling the medieval Holy Roman Empire. Although the protagonist is undeniably powerful, he won't easily reveal it, as it's his bargaining...

Rather than how unforgivable his crimes were, I care more about whether the logic behind his crimes and the methods he used were consistent with his character. In fact, if you find his logic understandable or even somewhat acceptable, then you can freely write your plot.

For example, if I wanted to depict a great famine and the tragedy of cannibalism, I would indirectly describe it, such as the extra bones. If I needed to describe it directly, and the character was an unfortunate participant forced to do so to survive, I would write about their inner struggle...

Well, when I have a clear blueprint for the story, I feel like I can finish writing it quickly, but the actual execution is much slower than I expect. Although this can be frustrating at times, having a clear goal allows me to refine the details of the story more meticulously, and I don't have...

An Machiavellian-style officer. In fact, when it comes to a character, I first clarify what identity he should have, what role he will play, whether he should exist here, and why he is here. Then I think about his specific personality, hobbies, interpersonal relationships and so on

The novel's readership did increase significantly on the day I posted it, but so far, very few people have given it a review. This feeling is a bit disheartening…

There's a lot of information fog, whether for the readers or the characters. But it doesn't affect reading; it just creates misunderstandings