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Thank you for your detailed feedback. I will definitely incorporate some of your suggestions, particularly those concerning logic and...

I normally wouldn’t give feedback on translated work, by Deepseek perhaps, but this is clearly a direct translation from your own...

Honestly, I was quite surprised to find Albrecht as the MC. During the first two chapters, he didn't have the qualities of a narrative...

I acknowledge your surprise, but in fact, this situation didn't last long; he quickly broke free and regained his freedom. This wasn't...

Well, I'm giving feedback as a casual reader. I usually only read once to gauge immersion. But this time I relaxed the reading...

I’ve read up to Chapter 2, and while there are many important elements, the frequent shifts in emotional perspective make it hard for...

Yes, sir. But in fact, Fiona isn't the protagonist; the protagonist is Albrecht, but he's clearly in a passive position. Under Gurga's...

dude.I saw it, and I can only say it's a pity. However, thank you for your help anyway.

Sir, I am incredibly grateful for your interest in my novel. It might be a somewhat peculiar work, not only because it has a slightly...

Okay, thank you for your feedback. Since this is a translation, it might sound a little strange, but no one told me that. Maybe I should...

I'm not sure if you'll read all the chapters, as it's quite a task. But if you'd like, please read the novel, even though it's a...

No one truly knows reader behavior except the reader themselves. As authors, we can only guess based on implied patterns. Personally...

If you have the time, please try reading my novel. Since my English isn't very good, I used a translation tool; I hope this won't...

I'm not sure if this perfectly fits your criteria, but perhaps you could try reading my novel. It's low fantasy, historical, but set in...

Rather than how unforgivable his crimes were, I care more about whether the logic behind his crimes and the methods he used were...