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Eldoria reacted to ACertainPassingUser's post in the thread Writing What do you think about yandere villainess as an antagonist to the protagonist? with
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Surprisingly reasonable progression, or unsurprisingly reasonable, depends on your perspective. Of course someone like the... -
Eldoria replied to the thread New author seeking feedback and advice.Don't overdo sensory descriptions in a single scene. If you provide too many sensory descriptions, the reader may lose focus. Instead...
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Eldoria reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Give me your thoughts about the emotional feeling with Like.
Yeah! My first draft actually doing that, but whenever I re-read again I couldn't feel the emotional tension, and ended up make it to 4...
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Eldoria reacted to Nevafrost's post in the thread Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut) with Like.
This is the best advises I have received (not exaggerating I swear). And, yes, I learned not to add dialogue tags if it spoils the...
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Eldoria reacted to BeezussWrites's post in the thread Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut) with Like.
I’m not going to start by pointing out all the small craft details to keep you from feeling overwhelmed, but the biggest problem I...
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The chinese just have fluff, aka flowery words, none related to story. And I genuinely hate it. Just tell me what your story will be...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Give me your thoughts about the emotional feeling.Hmm... maybe this question is more appropriate to ask loyal readers who have already invested 24 chapters, dude. Or if you're also...
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Eldoria reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Give me your thoughts about the emotional feeling with Like.
Yeah, i get what you mean. To be honest, I wanted to share the whole memory logs from chapter 22 until 25, to picture what truly happen...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Give me your thoughts about the emotional feeling.Hmm... I might be lacking context, dude. I might understand the protagonist's feelings a little bit. But I don't feel the betrayal...
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Eldoria reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Give me your thoughts about the emotional feeling with Like.
Betrayal and Regret to be precise.
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Eldoria commented on Assurbanipal_II's profile post.This trend is likely more of a habit, as many popular authors use this approach. New authors are more likely to follow suit than to...
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Eldoria commented on Assurbanipal_II's profile post.It's actually aimed at casual readers with short attention spans to filter thousands of fictions. But I also see it as a disadvantage...
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Eldoria reacted to Nevafrost's post in the thread Targeted Story Feedback Thread (READ THE NOTE) with Like.
Take my cordial greetings, dude. This amateur author hasn’t published her work yet (actually I'm rewriting) and wants to know if her...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Give me your thoughts about the emotional feeling.Dude... are the emotions you're referring to here that protagonist's anger at the betrayal?
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Eldoria reacted to TheKillingAlice's post in the thread Targeted Story Feedback Thread (READ THE NOTE) with Haha.
Damn, I was reading here, but why do I feel called out like this? :blob_popcorn_two: