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I once received an invitation from a dark fantasy group there to "support each other" against the dominance of the LitRPG genre. But I...

First, I want to say I needed more context just to give you a proper review, and because your chapters were so short overall, I went...

Please do enjoy your visit, kind sir. :blobtaco:

Sounds about right. Now implementing it is different.

I think of Charlie Brown.

Well, my FMC is named Marry, not 'Mary.' I know the name of Mary is used as a name for millions of women IRL.

That is unless you use a common name like Mary. If you say Mary, the reader is probably picturing someone.

I refuse to write this genderswap nonsense.

fair

A disciplined narrator lets the reader identify and recognize the character before naming him. When a character's name is mentioned in...

The general sequence of character introduction is: identifying the character's identity (appearance, physical characteristics...

IRL, when the name of someone you know is mentioned, your mind tends to conjure up a whole person with appearance, personality...

Dude, this should be in the story feedback thread or reader section, and you should put a link

Thank you for the feedback, yeah i felt there's no hook yet. I need to seek an idea first.