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Eldoria
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Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve!
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Thank you! I appreciate it.
Mar 15, 2026
Eldoria
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Targeted Story Feedback Thread (READ THE NOTE)
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Basically this but targeted: (Will try to still assess which part is good though) FORMAT (Read carefully~) {using these means just...
Mar 15, 2026
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404 not found on that link. I think it's better to just paste the link to your story below the format thing, and tell me which chapter...
Mar 15, 2026
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Fair enough, Thank you for reading.:blob_aww:
Mar 15, 2026
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Hello, dude. I'm currently looking for feedback on handling sensitive content centered on a single character. My specific questions I'm...
Mar 15, 2026
Eldoria
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First of all, should've been: Hail Arch devil, I require a champion to review my slaves(Mc and co) in my recent chapters(i.e., chapter...
Mar 15, 2026
Eldoria
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Feedback for my novel "Hyoren Enjo Journey on Another World". And how should i proceed with chapter length.
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Your approach is very similar to mine. It's nice to find other members with a similar approach.
Mar 15, 2026
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I don't hate characters who are reluctant to kill others, but I hate it when they forgive enemies who killed their loved ones and...
Mar 15, 2026
Eldoria
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Feedback for my novel "Hyoren Enjo Journey on Another World". And how should i proceed with chapter length.
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The way I do it [and I'm not exactly NYT bestseller here] is each chapter is its own story, its own tension, its own thesis. Yes, they...
Mar 15, 2026
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What a satisfying feeling to finally use this tag. I mean the story was already completed, but labeling it as such feels euphoric.
Mar 15, 2026
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Around where I'm from "too white" has a different meaning.
Mar 15, 2026
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To be fair, the novels targetted at straight women do this too with handsome men. Though, I prefer the protagonist to be on the cover.
Mar 14, 2026
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Clickbait
Mar 14, 2026
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So many times I got baited to click stories with male protagonist but female on the cover. :blob_no:
Mar 14, 2026
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You know... the characters who are reluctant to get their hands dirty killing bad guys as common in shounen and superheroes protagonists.
Mar 14, 2026
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