Recent content by ekam

I haven’t responded yet because I wanted to make sure I addressed this with a clear head. (and i was working on fiverr to earn bread, so i didnt check the forum after my last response. i dont have a name here, so probably i dont get 2 notifications per week) To be honest... I was afraid, this...

And what made you think so?

thanks for the heads up on the em-dashes, Its wild how a punctuation mark can become a red flag, but I totally see what you mean. I’ll be going through my current chapters to hunt those down and see if I can use more natural breaks instead. I’m glad you found the story fine despite the one...

i appreciate that. I’m comfortable speaking english and I like to think I can be creative with it, but you hit the nail on the head: writing is a different beast entirely. It’s a creative art meant to make people feel the words or leave them hanging in the dark. I actually just remembered a...

That means a lot. You’re right—I’m doing this because I love the story and the world, and I want to see if I can do justice to the ideas in my head. To be completely honest, while profit isn't my sole purpose, it would be a dream to eventually make this sustainable. We all need a clear mind and...

hello, sorry for using Neira earlier, I thought it would be a fun way to get into character and to be honest, a nice way to catch some attention. Thank you for being such a sport about it! I really appreciate you sharing your perspective on this. The 'car buffer vs. sanding machine' metaphor is...

thank you for the kind words and the very grounded advice. It means a lot to know the performance landed well. You are absolutely right about the burnout. I'll be saving the theatrics for special milestones to keep things fresh. As for Neira, she has been officially punished for her snarkiness...

Hi, thank you so much for taking the time to read Thirteen and provide such a thoughtful critique. As a first-timer sharing my work here, I really appreciate the detailed feedback... it's exactly what I need to make the story better. I've taken all your points into account, especially regarding...

Happy New Year, everyone! 2026 is here, and I’m excited to share a story that’s been brewing in the quiet margins of a very old world. Thirteen: Rebellion of Spirit — An Ancient Indian Fantasy Narrated by a Snarky Wolf! Title: Thirteen: Rebellion of Spirit [Book 1: Reforged] Genre: Action...