Recent content by DokForL

Great. This is exactly what I'm looking for. I need someone who can push me to the edge of suicide instead of patting my back while knowing I probably suck. Here's my story. I've wrote the first chapter and published it recently. More is to come, eventually. Rise of the Ascended Warrior

Hey, you have reading issues too? Welcome to the club, pal. I mostly use 'Read Aloud' on chrome to read stories because of my ADHD and Dyslexia. Fun combo (y) Enough about me, here's my story. Enjoy not reading it, I guess? Rise of the Ascended Warrior

Thanks for replying, I could say this style is a kind of experiment I tried, but in the last couple of days I've moved on to a more traditional style, and In the future I'll try not to disappoint. Hope you have a good day.

Seriously though, cute story, but bad writing, especially in chapter 3 :blob_thor:, probably because the "co-writer" was more drunk than you right now :blob_hide:

bro you drunk? :blob_drool:

Hello, Hope you're having a good day. This is my first work that I'm taking seriously, so I would prefer brutal honesty and criticism. Rise of the Ascended Warrior

Hello, Hope you're having a good day. This is my first work that I'm taking seriously, so I would prefer brutal honesty and criticism. Rise of the Ascended Warrior

Rise of the Ascended Warrior Hello, Hope you're having a good day. This is my first work that I'm taking seriously, so I would prefer brutal honesty and criticism, and I wouldn't mind if you read only the first chapter -- each one of the first two chapters has a 3500+ word count --

Any feedback is welcome, especially criticism... I've hit a road block in my pursuit of fair writing, and I need a new clean perspective. Rise of the Ascended Warrior