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A spoiler, you ask? Fat chance!

{Chapter 58 - Elder of Elders; Opening sequence. Context: MC was stationed at a strategic outpost when his unit was ambushed. He...

This seems like it's useful feedback from someone who knows what they're talking about. The only problem is that I don't know what...

Here you go https://www.scribblehub.com/series/967246/a-place-to-bloom/ Though TBH for useless, unreliable fees I could just have...

Fwiw if someone fanficted my shit, I would be flattered. I think. If they used punctuation

Get some ADHD medication and rethink your choices. And start using punctuation.

This puzzle has too many words for me.

At this point, I grew tired of the constant line-ups. :blob_cookie: Like, it's okay to do this once or twice, for style. When you...

That's... that's actually it. That's what I was going for.

*italics* Beneath a cloudy sky, cradled by forest-covered mountains, gently hugging the bay, was the city. Mud houses and stone...

To the cover?

opnions/suggestions? A Place To Bloom | Scribble Hub

Cut the first part of the sentence and begin with Alexander This description feels dry. It reads like "I'm supposed to describe this"...

Let me give you some advice. Or... nevermind