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    [aggregator] steals novels.

    This is making me recall the old days where some Chinese website literally copied and Google translated my old script fics...It's amusing as hell.
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    Writing bratty characters

    While I haven't posted the story here, I recall that one of my protagonists Hiro has a 10 year old younger sister Ami who is kind of a brat that gets on his nerves. Not really spoiled but quite mischievous. ...Then I also recalled they both lost their loving mother at an early age and their...
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    How would you describe your main antagonist as poorly as possible?

    Yep, as poorly as I can describe him (he's in a story I haven't post on SH yet).
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    How would you describe your main antagonist as poorly as possible?

    A high school student who decided to play Emperor of Mankind-I mean the entire delinquent population with delusional plans to take over the city with a massive tiger fetish.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/209329/the-kaimon-tales/ Planning on rewriting a few things before continuing this but give it a shot if you like!
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    Writing How do I move from a slice-of-life arc to an action arc?

    I did read some delinquent centered manga that tends to flip back and forth from light hearted moments to serious action moments. I guess you have establish an upcoming threat of the arc in a small yet shocking manner but make it clear it's not that the main characters will quickly react to it...
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    Story: The Kaimon Tales

    Because real life is some sort of life draining vampire, I think I'm going back to working on this...Like for reals this time before the ghouls come back. >_> Looking to see feedback to get an idea what needs improvement!
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    Editing How the Heck Do You Find Motivation to Go Back and Edit Your Chapters?!

    Keep reading your stuff and you'll start feeling like an idiot for not noticing what parts needs work. That'll get ya motivated quite quickly.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    That's okay. I'm just glad you gave it a chance.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/209329/the-kaimon-tales/ Honestly silly and a bit ridiculous rifed with grammar issues but does set the tone of this series. Enjoy.
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    How do you write a compelling friendship that doesn't end in romance?

    Writing friendships is indeed like writing romances, in which you write characters with emotions towards one another that are far closer than towards anyone else. It's just that you establish it's not exactly romantic. I know, sounds difficult but it's a thing you'll get upon actually...
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    Delinquent tag: what do you expect?

    As the title says. Well, in detail, what do you expect when reading a story with that tag? I think it's an interesting tag because of the fact that Yankee/delinquent focused stories are pretty rare and do stand out if stories here are exactly this. Then again, sometimes maybe it's just a few...
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    How do you visualize your scenes when you write a chapter?

    My story is basically an anime/manga so it's best to view it as such.
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    Story: The Kaimon Tales

    Hey there! Long time no see! I've been subtly changing the story up and doing my best to add fixes once in a while. And thank you for the good vibes really. :)
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    [R-18] What qualifies as smut?

    ...And now I question of the Smut tag for existing. ...Then again, I've went through years of retail to learn nobody ever reads the signs and warnings that are placed right in front of them until it smacks right into their face and somehow they get mad at you regardless. It's...Depressing...
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