Recent content by Deaath

Thank you, sir. I will admit, that's my fault for not proofreading the edited text. Does changing the sentence "I was too hungry to think ahead" to something like "Hunger clouded my mind" fix it or make it less bad? English is not my native language, so I'm not quite sure. Thank you again for...

Thank you, I really appreciate it. I will modify my chapters with what you've said in mind.

It would be nice if you took a look at mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/939011/prey-violent-monster-litrpgprogression/

Can you please taste this and let me know your opinion? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/939011/prey-violent-monster-litrpgprogression/ Note: chapters 1 & 6 to 10 were written using ai assistance, though you are free to pick what you want.

I'd be grateful if you could take a look. The first and 6th chapters were edited by GPT to fix the grammar, I will do the rest as well soon. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/939011/prey-violent-monster-litrpgprogression/