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hell0o, pls do take a look at this...the whole core plot of the world and all is in the description/summary but how it ties into everything would take some time but till then its a start Where Worlds Meet thanks for your feedback in advance

waaaaiiittt this is chapter 3, there are 2 chapters before this. i realise i should have linked it to the whole story or something, my bad although accepted, speed-type hunter might have just popped up out of nowhere. with regard to the show not tell part, i have thought of this one edit where...

Thanks a lot for that and the alternate suggestions as well. While thinking about it again based on what you said, I got another alternate way it could go. So he wouldn't have kicked if he could have used his staff. but now I'm thinking along with the block, he gets a strong grip on the staff...

Well umm all I have are 3 chapters so far, do read and...do whatever it is you do. It would be good feedback for me to work on (I might be adding a few chapters before you read it anyways, let's see how it goes) Where Worlds Meet

So I've written some stuff which I thought looked good on paper. But then again, I feel it might just be my bias as a writer towards my work. So if anyone could go through this it would be really great. There will be more such scenes coming in the next 2 chapters so I could use the feedback to...

I just know I can't write romance. Which is why I keep things in my stories limited to friendships

Interesting idea but of course I happen to be the exact opposite of that... Although remember, that story telling should also happen in the chapter names. The chapter name giving a foreshadowing effect to the chapter below (or string of chapters if having chapter groups) adds a nice touch a...

oh ok!!! thanks a lot! i am now relieved

So is this a thing or did I do something wrong? It's been an hour since I uploaded the first chapter of a new series...Would love to hear that it just takes time