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Hi ! I just posted the first two chapters (one prologue and one chapter really) of my story. I already outlined the whole story and I would like feedback on the first chapters to improve my writings as I go. Be brutally honest (but not mean please, I'm a softie). Please bear in mind I'm not a...

Hi ! I'd love to have your feedback on the first chapters of my story (just the prologue if you can't read both ofc) c: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2255710/dulmhak/