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    Stories not on my profile

    I do use Deepl for rough translation but I rewrite the part that doesn't sound good. I wrote it in French originally, and I asked AI for reformulation only on some sentences as I had trouble "getting them right"... does it look like AI ? I really tried to not use it too much 😭
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    Stories not on my profile

    I have this story but it doesn't appear on my profile and i feel like the number of views isn't right (i know some people read it, and it feels weird to have favorites but 0 views). Should I wait or is it a problem ? Thank you in advance !
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    New author wanting feedback

    Thank you so much for your feedback! <3 I use the em dash (—) because it’s the standard for dialogue in French, so I’m veeeeery used to it, haha, for example: When I translated my French work, I didn’t realise it would feel so different in English, since I read a lot in English but never...
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    Feedbag Thread For Indie Writers of Original Fictions [Closed Till I Catch Up]

    I do consent to these activities and agree to be a mature adult and not seek retribution for your thoughts haha ! It's a translation of my own work (in French, so I use the french standard for dialogue which I'll soon correct as it doesn't seem to be pleasing to english readers). It's still new...
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    New author wanting feedback

    Hi ! I just posted the first two chapters (one prologue and one chapter really) of my story. I already outlined the whole story and I would like feedback on the first chapters to improve my writings as I go. Be brutally honest (but not mean please, I'm a softie). Please bear in mind I'm not a...
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