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Thank you for your response. I have noted your helpful feedback. Here are more points: I don't think so. He has been staying inside most of the time, and I just wanted to show that his condition has come to that point. Yes, Kevin. Yes, he died of physical and mental exhaustion. No, in my...

Thank you very much for your response. I didn't expect anyone to reply. For the first point, I just didn't know how to write it; like I wouldn't be able to emphasize his love for games without understating it otherwise. For the second point: No, at first, no one forced him; he was just...

BenJepheneT is a is an incomprehensible dick. He sometimes twitches, but sometimes he crouches. He eventually grew up to be a man and displayed his might. EDIT: Damn his username is so hard my prompt doesn't even reach 100 words

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Village (0,0) Hut: Wood [5/5] (0,1) Well: Stone [2/3] Wood [1/1] (1,1) Fantasy-World-Portal: Obsidian [0/10] Flint and Steel [0/1] (1,2) Simple Tombstone Grave [1/1] (1,3) Cemetery: Stone [0/15] Dead Body [0/∞] Stockpile Stone: 2 Wood: 1 Silver: 1 Copper: 1 Spear: 1 Bone: 1 Dead Body: 0...

My series is a short story collection (avg. 500 words per story) called Cultivator Stories. Please give a lot of feedback in almost all aspects: storyline, plot, structure, dialogue, description, characterization, etc. I'd also like some advice on chapter management and author-reader...