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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread Is this a good synopsis for my story? with
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OK, first, you don't want a "good" synopsis unless the story is finished - you want an EFFECTIVE one, one that at least hints at your... -
Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to AletheLumina's post in the thread Is this a good synopsis for my story? with Like.
Hello everyone, it's my first time posting something here in the SH forums. I've been writing a story of my own lately based on one of...
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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2189063/hacking-the-system-kingdom-of-stone-litrpg/
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Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread How do you come up with names?.Sometimes I pick superhero names with the same initials, out of pocket names, colors, or names from old fables I like.
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to WasatchWind's post in the thread How do you come up with names? with Like.
I've been thick in the weeds with coming up with names for characters, places, etc. for my fantasy world Treyidal. Just curious, how do...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread What would you do?.I would kick her out my bed and go back to sleep
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What would you do if you woke up in the morning and found a catgirl lying next to you?
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Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread Why does Isekai have so much hate?.Had no idea Isekai gets hate
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
Somehow reminds me of a story I started reading but never got back to on Royal Road - in a world where professional dungeon explorers...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
I wouldn’t say doing everything you can to get back to your sister is a strong hook, or a hook at all. It does, however, establish your...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Lysander_Works's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
I'm gonna take a second crack it it here before nodding off to bed. Waking to a world unfamiliar, in a world far too different from my...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
The clarity is good. The hooks? not so much. Like the posts before me said, need more punchier. Similar premises like others? yes, but...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Puffikki's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
Slightly conflicting tonezees here, shifting from a casual sounding opening and playful, to heavier, desperate even. It makes me wonder...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to SouthernMaiden's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
I would suggest, shorten it. Make it a bit punchier. Possibly split it into three paragraphs. Also, first sentence seems weak. Hit me...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Lysander_Works's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
Got a new story soon to launch, but I skipped the synopsis all the way to now, and now I really don't know how it's supposed to feel...