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Cookiez_N_Potionz updated their status.Shout-Out: Just wanted to thank the 15 readers for checking out my second LitRPG Webnovel! Your the best and you've helped me improve so... -
Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Jaymi's post in the thread When does a character go from flawed to unlikable? with
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In my opinion the line gets drawn the moment a character's flaw(s) becomes their entire identity. Completely overshadowing whatever good... -
Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread Would Love Some Feedback! ☮️.Thx ☮️
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I agree with other respondents that a good synopsis should have a hook. Furthermore, a synopsis should make the reader care about your...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to KidBuu699's post in the thread How to write a good synopsis? with Like.
The synopsis, in my opinion, should have 3 things in it. It should give an idea of what the story is going to be about...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Like.
I’m not saying you need to include the entire plot in your synopsis. What I am saying is that it currently reads like random bullet...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open].So, I need to link Sage to the plot? Honestly, this story is still developing. But since Sage is also a MC I guess I should give her...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread Would Love Some Feedback! ☮️.Yikes, get better Mike! ❤️
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Alright. I'll put it at the top of my list for when I'm feeling better. Sick w/ Covid atm.
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Jaymi's post in the thread I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it with Like.
Since Chapter 1 was super short, I wanted to read Chapter 2 as well. I’ll be honest, the formatting kinda killed my patience...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it.My bad, maybe I missed it??? Hey, thx for your awesome feedback! Sorry for overlooking this ☮️
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Jaymi's post in the thread I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it with Like.
I reviewed your’s already y’know ?
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Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open].Okay, thank for the advice! ❤️ But I thought I was being obvious about the calamity? People in danger or people dying seems like a big deal
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Like.
Buzzwords that almost meant nothing. Make it personal. Urban dungeons? Advancing society? That is actually an intriguing premise, and I...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to MajorKerina's post in the thread How can i write believable relationships. with Like.
Believable friendships have a history they're not perfect they differ by gender and personality outgoing friendships versus introverted...