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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Hey there, I need your opinion with
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Those explanations make total sense, as I thought. I'd tweak the synopsis and maybe make it less complicated and more about the actual... -
Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread Hey there, I need your opinion.Can you give me an example of a hook? Should I do a quote?
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Cookiez_N_Potionz replied to the thread Hey there, I need your opinion.So, if the info I just wrote down is unnecessary than what should I do? Cause I'm trying not to give too much away, Im starting to...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Hey there, I need your opinion with Like.
Can I be totally honest? I voted in between, because a synopsis needs to be accurate. So if this synopsis is indeed the story you want...
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It's 1977 and society has advanced due to the spoils of war that the newly established Guilds have clawed out of urban dungeons all over...
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In theory, everything looks great, however, there’s rlly nothing that piqued my interest. No hook. Check for that
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Your synopsis still contains unnecessary infodump to make readers care. Furthermore, the personal stakes are only implied, making it...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Writing How do you make your character's voice come alive in dialogue? with Like.
Well, character voice is the foundation, but recognition is the result. The emphasis is on letting the character's voice gradually...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to CinnaSloth's post in the thread Writing How do you make your character's voice come alive in dialogue? with Like.
I think each character lives in punctuation, words choice, and phrasing. In my stories, I tend to have an array of characters, and each...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to pangmida's post in the thread Writing How do you make your character's voice come alive in dialogue? with Like.
Well then I guess that answers your OP question ? building voices requires familiarity most of all. Just have readers follow along long...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Writing How do you make your character's voice come alive in dialogue? with Like.
Honestly, I couldn't possibly recognise who was speaking in your dialogue examples (when covering the character name label) ... not...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Jerynboe's post in the thread Writing How do you make your character's voice come alive in dialogue? with Like.
I am not entirely sure how I do it from a technical perspective, but I came from an acting and roleplaying background (specifically as a...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to pangmida's post in the thread Writing How do you make your character's voice come alive in dialogue? with Like.
My secret to writing dialogue is by voice acting the scene out loud. :blob_sir: I sound crazy talking to myself alone in my room, but I...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Writing How do you make your character's voice come alive in dialogue? with Like.
Living Character Voices in Dialogue Every character has a unique personality that makes them a complete individual. Indeed, some...
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It's me, Thorn. ❤️ Title: Scapegrace ( placeholder ) Synopsis: It's 1977 and society has advanced thanks to the urban dungeons that...
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