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Not sure that steampunk stories are dead, but steampunk videogames, movies, tvshows ect sure are. Pretty much every other time up... -
Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Ral_062's post in the thread can someone give me feedback on my story? with
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I've been writing this for about a year, it had gone through 4 revisions. While i already have 12 chapters, i thought i'd revise some... -
Depends on how long the story is and how you plan to present the mystery. The author has denied that either one is really a mystery, but...
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I think you can do it. Read a few mystery novels for the vibe, and almost grey-tone feel. Plot out the puzzles and mysteries in bullet...
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How hard is it to write a mystery novel without it feeling cheap? I have no intention of writing a mystery novel as I couldn't for the...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to rest256's post in the thread Greetings from Japan! I'm bringing my 3M+ views, 700-chapter saga to the West. Feedback wanted! with Like.
Hello, Scribble Hub community! I am Rest, a web novel author from Japan. I have recently started posting my life’s work, "FabL," here...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance? with Like.
Ah, in that case the grammar and awkwardness is appropriate. Not something I, personally, would be interested in, but I know others...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to HarryGarland's post in the thread Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance? with Like.
Not sure I quite get what you mean. I ran it thru deepseek and Claude, found one or two grammar errors. I think I get the clunky part...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance? with Like.
Not without a bit of a grammar scrub. Some clunky lines suggest the whole book will be just as tough to wade through in places and does...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance? with Like.
Okay, if you're asking for additional advice: Adjust your synopsis to suit the platform. Don't use "What to Expect" in SH, but you are...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to HarryGarland's post in the thread Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance? with Like.
Thanks. By "format of a web novel" did you mean "avoid giant, eye-straning....." Or something else? Sorry if I sound weird. Just want...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Macha's post in the thread Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance? with Like.
Sea Bears can easily be antagonized by many things. Some of the common ones to avoid are listed below. Waving a flashlight back and...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to SouthernMaiden's post in the thread Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance? with Like.
I think its intriguing, makes me want to know more. Personally I would prefer that it was a lil shorter and more concise
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to laccoff_mawning's post in the thread Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance? with Like.
No. But I mostly read comedies so it might be more of a genre thing than your synopsis being bad.
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance? with Like.
Quite immersive... I can grasp the conflict in your fiction. I'm not offering any advice regarding synopsis content, but your synopsis...