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Hello there, this is my introductory post, so I'll introduce myself... Hello, my name is Svary! Now that introductions are out of the...

Hello, I’m up for a feedback exchange. I read the first chapter to start, and there’s a lot here that works. The atmosphere is strong...

Hell yeah! I'll give your chapters a read and get back to ya when I can!

Cool! 6.5k for a first chapter is crazy but clearly it's working for you. Lemme give this a shot. I'll edit this comment as I go. In...

Thanks

would if I was like 20 chapters ahead lol

Well, getting a character walking down the runway with their attire described immediately at the beginning did have me reaching for my...

I ran a similar thread before, but I eventually likened all my feedback to reading a story for the sake of answering questions for a...

Early to one of these for once, cool. Thanks in advance! Also, how do you format messages to always have your book at the bottom?

Yeah, your last guess is pretty much a good summary of what the tone of it is.

We are never beating the SmutHub allegations, are we?

They are more freaky here.

salt is the best flavor! Mine is a 'slow' start at first.

It’s kinda funny how it all just comes down to immersion. The moment something starts feeling forced or repetitive, you just… lose...

if subverting this trope is going to be your biggest pull, maybe make the very first sentence about it, no fluff in front of it (the...