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    Feedback and any suggestions or comments, it is my first novel

    Haha Cheers I just finished Chapter 1 just now. it may be a bit more broken up than it should be let me know if it's good now. and thanks for all the help.
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    Feedback and any suggestions or comments, it is my first novel

    I tried fixing the formatting for the prologue what do you think?
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    Feedback and any suggestions or comments, it is my first novel

    thank you that actually helps a lot as I said this is my first novel and I'm kind of winging it. so besides the formatting issues any thoughts on how the story is so far?
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    Feedback and any suggestions or comments, it is my first novel

    Hi I'm writing a new novel only 2 chapters so far but I would really appreciate any suggestions or thoughts, because it seems to be doing well but as I'm the one writing it I am unable to read it as objectively is I would other people's novels. Thank You...
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