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Hey, since I did not mention the link last time. Here it is, B*stard of Abaddon. I have to warn you, there are a few sensitive themes.

Okay here you go. B*stard of abaddon. :s_smile:

Can i come for round 2? I changed quite a few things so if you are okay with it I'll leave my revamped novel.

How Sweet of you. :blob_aww:

U meant to reply to my reply or pancakes reply?

I do read, but i want to know where I stand in terms of writing action.

Should I delete it now?

I wrote an entire chapter with an action scene, but I can't say if it is slow, fast, good, bad. I would appreciate if somebody took a...

Liberator Orc... hmm, i like that

Okay, I'll move forward with the 18th chapter then, thank you for your suggestions. :blob_melt: It was a design choice, my bad. I made...

My original plan was this, but a sharp drop in readers in chapter 2 made me question my choice of character switch. I felt that it was...

Okay, thank you for replying. :s_smile:

Then what should I do to fix it?

I've recently edited and revamped my prologue, chapter 1,2,3 and want to know if the plot is engaging or not. I would appreciate it if...

Thrice i've been victim of this..