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Chapter title or thread title?

Ah, well, then I would appreciate your answers. :)

As the title suggests, I wrote a chapter with child abuse in it. I will post it here and ask a few questions to know if I fulfilled my...

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yes?

Maybe it is

Dear dairy Someone asked me for directions today. And I told them with out making a mistake. I am so proud of myself. Are you proud of...

Dear diary, Every day I see views increasing, but no one follows my novel, not that I am writing some jrr level shi. Still, it is...

Yeah, I understand that now. I just tried to read it from the reader's perspective and understood what you said.

Yeah, that is true in ch 1. I have to rewrite it, but I'm currently focusing on moving forward and developing my own style.

I kind of assume that the atmosphere carries over from the previous chapter. Currently, most of my chapters are continuing scenes with...

You're definitely getting more into the sway of things in the later chapters than the beginning ones. A reader can tell that you are...

Dont worry, its merit by progress. More chapters you have, the more you know what suit you and the majority of your readers. (said...

Yeah, that is why I decided you re-write after writing 20 chapters or so, because I believe I'll find my own style or at least something...

It is my bad, this chapter is the 11th one so I understand your disconnection between characters and world. But thank your for reading.