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I don't really want to accuse you of anything, and I think you know that I already helped you, so I have good intentions, but either you...

I write in an app called Scrivener, in it I have to press enter twice to give space between paragraphs. Sometimes I press enter three...

w Tried to fix the pov shifts and re-written few cinematic sections. :blob_cookie: Ninety-four silver, six more, and I won’t be...

Okay, is that the only problem you found? Or do I have to fix something else too? Thanks for replying.

You don't know how good it felt to read that I fixed something. Thank you for reading.

No, that was all there was to it. But if you want more praise, here it is: Your opening single-handedly addressed the major issue I...

It was unintentional; I was trying to create a middle ground between two characters, and the colours ended up creating this.

I like the way the blue and red meet to create the purple.

umm, there is something wrong with your reply, only half of it is being shown. Idk if you intended to review my new chapter or not.

This probably boils down to personal taste. As a frustrated teenager who often felt taken for granted, unappreciated, not respected...

Generally, I dont. And generally they are not written as rational, pragmatic or "smart", they are just the author's surrogate to live...

THAT sounds like it has a lot more potential. But you see where precedent brought my mind and expectations

Considering how popular all the Chinese cultivation stories are, I think the internet loves selfish MCs. "Oh, you walked on the same...

Usually they work out if you make proper drama and tragedy and the reason why they're shit, if they are just shit with no reason then...

All I know is I've tried writing one twice. Made it to about chapter seven the first time and chapter five the second, but it's not...