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Opinion?

I think i'll just edit few things and see if it is clear.

A dark themed harry poter academy set in a warhammer-esque( only the iron blood city ) world? Count me in

Well, in a way. The world is very harsh as the people of said world encourage violence and control as everyone in the world is trying...

I want to know if this particular block felt good or bad, i would appreciate if you can state your reasons. The shadow in front of him...

Is your world set in grimdark? Because the terms like "grooming" sound mature.

I meant the academy part only, rest all is different.

oh you took a look at the prologue. I was confused for a minute. I probably have to re-edit prologue. I've only written as a sneak peak...

That image of him eating is engraved into my gray matter.

Sounds little similar to the shadow slave, don't you think? Focus more on grooming and slavery part to give it a distinct vibe. And my...

Not surprising considering my character is a slave.

I guess, i packed too much for a small thumbnail. yep. Abaddon is not visible and characters too.

The problem is i started my chapter 1 abruptly, one complain i received is how the story just starts right off without any beginning, i...

Umm they used be in a relationship, where one used the other's influence and got what he needed. After that he left her. This is the...

No a toxic relationship, where one used the other for their needs.