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Just googled and the kind of malnourishment you want to imply would have the face look close to a skull 💀 So frail that they can't move...

oops. I was in a DIalogue style thread. My boss picking me up for work was beeping as I finished that post. My bad, may pygmies eat my...

Kind of fixed it?

The character is still too blended with the background. Try to use Analogous color to make your character have different values and...

I am confused, where did the dialogue stuff come from :blob_sweat: . You are right though i don't need to worry about wastage, in case...

That was something i was afraid of. I need to resize it once and check. He is thin, frail, and malnourished, the baby fat cheeks still...

I like the "watercolor" aesthetic. reminds me of 1960's 1970's covers. A bygone era. I think the font might get funny when viewed small...

I started associating dialogues with an action, like-- By now his master stood in front of the table with a glass bottle of blood ale in...

Using of Dialogue Tags in Fiction In dialogue, tags are often used to briefly identify characters. Dialogue tags like "Barry said..."...

yep a 13-14 year old frail boy(slave).

okay I'll try to redo his part, and its a boy :blob_sweat: .

Hey I've fixed my cover to some extent. But it is awaiting approval. I'll put it here, can you tell if it is still burning your eyes or not?

I re-did my cover art as people said. I need opinion on this new one and if it is better than the old one or not. Old one. New one.

okay just as i intended him to be, weak and the kind to complain inside, but still responsible to take care of himself. And yes i trying...

Steady on :blob_salute: