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I like the "watercolor" aesthetic. reminds me of 1960's 1970's covers. A bygone era. I think the font might get funny when viewed small...

I started associating dialogues with an action, like-- By now his master stood in front of the table with a glass bottle of blood ale in...

Using of Dialogue Tags in Fiction In dialogue, tags are often used to briefly identify characters. Dialogue tags like "Barry said..."...

yep a 13-14 year old frail boy(slave).

okay I'll try to redo his part, and its a boy :blob_sweat: .

Hey I've fixed my cover to some extent. But it is awaiting approval. I'll put it here, can you tell if it is still burning your eyes or not?

I re-did my cover art as people said. I need opinion on this new one and if it is better than the old one or not. Old one. New one.

okay just as i intended him to be, weak and the kind to complain inside, but still responsible to take care of himself. And yes i trying...

Steady on :blob_salute:

1. Right now its just winning bets. 2. His two friends. 3. Everyone else. 4. By betting and winning, and sometimes stealing.

Off the cuff, Aegis's behavior feels very authentic for someone very much on the wrong end of power imbalances (and I like that they're...

Thank you so much! you just pushed me toward writing more. :blob_aww:

I need feedback on one of my characters, his name is aegis and this chapter perfectly captures how he behaves. I want to know your...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1941664/beneath-the-crown/ could u give mine feedback too. currently 24 chapters. its a Dark Fantasy...