Recent content by BrokenShuriken

I fixed all the errors. Can you once check out the story. And give a review of the story. (I was told that in first 3 chapters the pacing was fast. so, I am already trying to overcome that.) [7 Entities]

{My novel} Thanks a lot for all the advice.

English is not my native language. I will look into the punctuation and genres as well. Is the story tagged by link option??

Thanks a lot. I am sorry. I was new to scribble hub and went overboard. I will not be doing it again😅. Also I just fixed the spacing issue. If you are willing to give it one more try I'D be very happy. If in case you read it please give me a honest review on how it felt.

Thanks a lott for the advice. I was new to scribble hub(It's my mistake I didn't preview the chapters). I just copy pasted them. I just fixed them and numbered the chapters. If you are willing to, please give it one more try. You can openly rate it 1star if you find any inconsistencies or...