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yup. actually, the narrative jump only started after 1 hour of them fighting, and i also exclude that tiny bit and only posted the climax part of the fight. so all their banters, mocking, ect. are not included. maybe I shouldn't use high-stakes term cuz it's kinda clickbait, and now it really...

so should I abandon writing my story in a Light Novel narrative approach simply because it is ugly? I am joining a Light Novel industry, not western novel writing. what's wrong with pursuing writing stories in a Light Novel fashion anyways? is it forbidden of some sort? would that make me less...

sorry, but I intend to write a Light Novel format, not western style novel. It seems like your narration style leans to that part, on which I humbly apologize if I didn't tell sooner. I am actively aware that "show not tell" is infinitely superior, but Light Novels are not written like that...

the organization was created for him alone, not to contain monsters like him. they were afraid that Soru might indiscriminately kill if no one would stand up and mitigate the casualties. Soru was still a kindergarten student, and of course the organization only established at a early stages. i...

i mean, he's too full of himself and forgot it's a battlefield: anything can happen. he was effortless when fighting the other three, and got distracted even once and got himself dead. in short, are you implying that I need to shorten sensory details? or keep the action concise? wouldn't it...

it is kind of misleading if you didn't actually know the context, I understand that HAHAHHAHA!

mine's just a basic transmigration story but with 2 main characters. the one mentioned above was the main, while the other's a deuteragonist. about my main character, well he's: >true neutral in personality (neither good or bad, i hate picking sides tbh. got tired of it ages ago) >his power is...

what genres you prefer tho? maybe it suits your taste.

maybe he/she likes probing around? let them be HAHAHA

this is still a disclosed information (need minor revision due to clunky narrative lol) I wanna know if his backstory is interesting enough for you readers to learn and follow his character progression.

oh, sorry. i didn't include the mid-fight scene but only the climax. before that part, he was overwhelming the other 2 who got unconscious before the FMC distracted him. plus yeah, using all strength + enemy got caught off guard and got smashed in the head? it was commendable for him that even...

could you be more specific? by the way I am not actually writing a western-style novel, but a Light Novel where "telling" is more emphasized than "showing" so I am minimizing the sensory details make sense. thanks for the advice and thank you! Unfortunately, I will move my revised version to...

am I doing this right? The moment the hammerhead connected with Agnar’s head, a painful shockwave tore through his body. Blood streamed ceaselessly from the wounds caused by the impact. Such a devastating* blow sent him crashing into the ground, rolling multiple times before coming to a stop.

Action, Adventure, Isekai, Slice of Life, Kingdom Building. wouldn't it create a confusion who's who? there are multiple characters that ganged up to the villain...

Because he barely blocked it (i intend to use graze but that is not how blades react when it receive an impact). he managed to react but not enough to block it completely, hence the edge only had cracked. Plus, the sword still had uses in the ff. chapter so I intentionally spared it cuz if it is...