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BernKatstel commented on sleepandeatallday's profile post.Ugly bird thinks he’s virtuous :blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl:
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Virtuous creatures such as I are bound to attract enemies.
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Ayy,, the return of the king
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BernKatstel commented on Quacky's profile post.Good, she deserves to be all wrinkly for daring to exist!
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A little? The Witch got even older while you were sleeping!
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BernKatstel replied to the thread Feedback for the Prologue.I gave it a read. I mostly agree with what Eldoria said: there’s a very distinct lack of description and immersive writing overall. I...
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Hello, I tried to rewrite my Prologue for my web-novel : Battle Mage. Please give me your thought about the content of my prologue. Any...
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Honestly, dude. In terms of writing style, I prefer your old prologue. The old prologue had a solid narrative. The scenes were very...
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BernKatstel commented on Quacky's profile post.Just a little cat nap
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Finally woken from your slumber have you?
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Suffer
