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I’ve read a few of your chapters already, and I want to say I've seen how often you're in here asking for help and I respect the amount...

Do you mean chapter 10? Or are you releasing 11 soon?

Getting to you today. What specific chapter do you want me to read?

Really been distracted with writing, so sorry about how long this took/how little I actually said during this. The fact you only have...

Thank you for your honest feedback. Yes, this chapter is more like a prologue. I did use in medias res to the main scene without a long...

This is most definitely my least clear one so far, so I'm sorry about this. Wrote this before work one day and bits during it the next...

I actually really enjoyed this, even kind of expecting what would come by the end of the chapter. Classic “needs the money to pay for a...

I’m not going to start by pointing out all the small craft details to keep you from feeling overwhelmed, but the biggest problem I...

Feel like I didn't fully address what you asked feedback wise, sorry. This isn't meant to be a "your approach is wrong," but more so it...

I’ll lead off by saying I don’t really enjoy super emotionless characters (which the character came off to me as), so this is coming...

First, I want to say I needed more context just to give you a proper review, and because your chapters were so short overall, I went...

I went through three of yours since they were so short, and you had the decency to proofread it first. I'll get back to you once I get...

I'll read the first chapter of your story. I'm a better reader than a writer, so my points will be focused on how it made me feel than a...

The goal was to rewrite the specific chapter that she linked in her original post. I'm pretty sure you just posted your own story. Are...

I can't tell what timezones are on this site, but hopefully I'm not too late because It's an interesting idea. The 600 word limit was...