Recent content by AweksLear

Your stories aren't for everyone so don't sweat it. My guess is that the people who rated your story one star found the protag infuriating.

Its has an interesting start and other than some odd phrases, is pleasant to read. My main problem with the story is that none of the characters really have any agency. The main cast meets the old one and gets caught by the G-Man and let go. They don't really get to do anything. This causes...

Requesting feedback on my story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/16811/relevance-and-a-world-flying-off-the-tracks/ Please let me know what I should be focusing on and any flaws that need correction. Thank you.