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Thanks so much for the feedback! I completely agree, using too many commas is easily my biggest writing sin. Will definitely work on it with the sequels. ?

Hi guys! So I've written a short Choose Your Own Adventure Game set in Ancient Rome, and would be really great if I could get some feedback on it. I'm planning a sequel and it would be great to get some ideas on how I could improve. Also if anybody could let me know if they find any mistakes or...