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Loop`de-loop

Hidden Cloud Ninja Village appears as an island near Birka before it is destroyed. What sort of things will happen? (time period is flexible)

Perfect Logic = all the pieces fit together correctly |_ therefore, it works. "Excessive Logic' is when you already have Perfect Logic, but you pile on extra to make sure. This is like grime in the gears, not healthy; you'll need to clean it out eventually.

Oh my god. Principles are absolute fundamental bases of existence. Principals (Spelled Differently) are temporary rules that only work while digesting a certain unique context that will not exactly be experienced again. You know, I emphasized the difference clearly with italics &...

Umu.

Translation: everything is always changing. Nothing ever stays the same. -Heraclitus Everything always stays the same. Nothing ever changes. -Parmenides Definition is the immovable mover progressively solving chaos via order. -Socrates & Aristotle (paraphrase) Sigh, you need not know...

Oh, okay? Magic and supernatural, by what I said, exist based on cause and effect like everything else. The principle concepts relating to any physical phenomena are fundamental physics; the principal derivatives (temporary rules) are contextual physics specific to the unique application of...

As long as you understand that certainty is indeed possible, of course mistaken hypotheses exist inevitably. Learning is difficult ... if it is easy, its because you have accumulated the necessary foundation. No enjoyment of anything is possible unless you have built a reliable frame to reach...

I mean, its fine if your character makes the mistake of thinking physics can be broken. Mistakes are made in life. But as the story teller, it is definitely useful to know that it is indeed a mistake. Physics is a principle concept which indicates the basic causal relationship(s) between...

LOGIC is the art of anticontradictory identification; causal fluency. You don't even stick to the actual meaning of words and just use the stereotype "logic = boring unending formulas". a LOGICAL NARRATIVE is a telling of events with a fully functional theme and plot Who can talk to a bastard...

I'm talking about creating something with perfect logic so it aligns with reality & therefore can be considered genuine intelligible content. Your response to this is decrying that I am speaking nonsense. By what standard? Nonsense Land? [IOW, nih.]

Well, you and quite a few others don't seem to comprehend that if your story doesn't fucking make sense you can't possibly enjoy it. Of course, you don't need to write a bunch of useless details that are uninteresting and get in the way of experiencing the plot. I never said you had to give...

Write as if you are detailing a scientific sequence of causality. Only after you ideally-fit all the cogs & gears will the machine begin functioning. Don't delude yourself into thinking it is functioning unless you directly experience the flare of sublime activity a finished chapter...

If you don't enjoy it—despite being the cause—it ain't finished. At least make sure to say: 'Any Ideas To Make This Worth Reading? Thanks!" Though in that case, storyreaders are not the audience you are seeking You want: storywriters assisting. But in that case, doesn't this forum have...