Recent content by Aushin

Yeah, I'm currently reviewing all I learned in English, since I haven't been studying the grammar and syntax in a long time, so I forgot a lot. But having basic story knowledge is also good.

Thank you. Yeah, I'm using this more as a training first, so I can learn English better, while trying to use some stuff I know about plot, characters and all. Although I feel I have a harder time with English, rather than the plot sometimes, haha.

Thanks, that would help a lot. Yeah, I'm not a native so, best way to learn is to practice. Hehe. Was it that terrible for you? Damn. Thanks for reading, nonetheless. When the accursed Arcane suddenly opened a blasphemous and bizarre portal, Alton knew he had to investigate the culprits of...

Not it's okay. Can you give me some examples? Just so I can identify this and fix.

Yeah, I need to look out for the mixing of tenses and get stuff into past tense. Also about the grammar, kindah doing this to improve my English, so I'll have to look carefully what you mean on the incomplete sentences.

I rewrote my first chapter to be more concise. Can anyone give it a go? Need feedback. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/287122/midnight-guard-tales-of-loz/

Thank you for the insight. I'll try to work on that.

As the title says, here my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/287122/midnight-guard-tales-of-loz/ I wish for some feedback, opinions, and things I could fix.

Sorry about it. Will do.

Bow throwing. Not arrow shooting. Just throwing bows. I don't remember where I saw this. Yet I'm sure it was some very bad fantasy story.

Posted my first story today, just want your opinion(feedback). No need to predict. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/287122/midnight-guard-tales-of-loz/

I have a verified email and all. Yet, when I've rated a story 5 stars. It remains at 0 stars and it won't change whatever I do. Can someone close or delete this? I did a big dum here, and now I'm ashamed.