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yeah thanks for the feedback. i will still write mostly a bit long chapter. but maybe not 10k+ chapter unless it was really necessary. i...
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This. With sprinkles.
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You can use a cliffhanger ending to cut off your chapters. Cut the chapter at a crucial or pivotal moment. This will keep the reader's...
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The way I do it [and I'm not exactly NYT bestseller here] is each chapter is its own story, its own tension, its own thesis. Yes, they...
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Oh boy, I think making any changes based on numbers is the riskiest thing there is. If everyone followed the norms, we'd have very...
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I write long chapter before because I often write what my character do in one day or at least, one mini arc, in single sitting before...
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Your chapters are like giants, dude. My advice is simple: break them down into smaller chapters. For example, Chapter 1: Chapter Title...
Mar 14, 2026
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I see. I guess my opening chapter is still weak. The lack of tension is indeed what bother me after i go back to it. I kinda want to...
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I read almost halfway through the first chapter and got bored. First, it's clear English isn't your first language. The fact alone...
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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2223034/hyoren-enjo-journey-on-another-world/ I did write my first novel here. I did write 10-11k...
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