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I liked the layout and all that but i found it difficult to get started on there with the lack of exposure for new authors. In comparison it only took two weeks of RR for my fantasy novel to reach what took five months of posting on wattpad.

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Id advise removing the double spaces between the lines and reworking the synopsis as at the moment it doesn't quite pique my interest

Hi, I've just posted my first chapter of my new series, id love some feedback and know what you think. Its a dark fantasy story. Humans Are Delicious | Scribble Hub

Mine fits your requirements, feel free to use it if you want to Chronicles of a Blessed Adventurer | Scribble Hub

Thank you, I can see your point, creating a title is something I have always struggled with, that was the best one I could come up with according to the poll I did. The revenge premise, did you get that from what you read or the synopsis. Because now I think of it the series has changed so much...

I think i already know the answer but if you have time can you do mine aswell. Knowing the reasons like for telods is always useful. Chronicles of a Blessed Adventurer | Scribble Hub

If you are still doing them, I would greatly appreciate it if you'd consider mine as well, any suggestions on the story/ flaws/ weaknesses/strong points are always greatly appreciated and needed. Chronicles of a Blessed Adventurer | Scribble Hub

Thank you all for your advice, i have decided to delete it, I've kept a save of it just in case i ever decide to edit it and try again.

Hi all, quick favour to ask if that's okay. Ive heard some feedback about my prologue pretty much -weakest point/ not needed/ people get enough info from the story/ turns people away before they get to enjoy the story. Would anyone be willing to give it a read and maybe a 1-2 chapters past that...