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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    I'm sorry for the delay. Due to moving and relocation, I didn't have enough time and couldn't concentrate properly. I hope you enjoy it.
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    Okay, thank you for your suggestion.
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    Thank you for pointing out this historical nuance. I am fully aware of the complex journey of this word through various languages and cultures, and the negative connotations it acquired in a specific period. However, in my fictional world, this name has returned to its ancient and original...
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    Episode 30 is uploaded. Thank you all, and I look forward to your comments and suggestions.
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    Thank you for taking the time to share your feedback. I appreciate every reader's perspective as it helps me see different viewpoints. Regarding the prose: The stylistic choice is intentional and part of my personal narrative style for this epic fantasy genre. I use detailed descriptions to...
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    I apologize for the delay. Episode 29 has been released.
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    Thank you for your comment, but I must say that I don't speak English and I'm translating my work, so yes, this problem has occurred, but in terms of the content of the work, there is no sign of artificial intelligence. You can look at all the parts. You can see about this poetic and descriptive...
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    I apologize to everyone because the release time has been disrupted due to some problems that have arisen. But now 27 chapters have been released, and I'm eagerly waiting to see your comments.
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    Chapter 25 has been uploaded and thank you for reading. I am looking forward to your feedback and comments.?? Of course, I hope you'll tell me more about the problems in my novel because I want to fix them when I rewrite it.
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    I can't wait for you to review my novel. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1760344/the-heir-of-truth/stats/
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    I'll review first chapters... ?

    This is the link to my novel. I would be happy if you would check it out. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1760344/the-heir-of-truth/
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    First time writing. Please try it out and leave a review

    I read your first chapter; it had a good story, a protest against corruption in society. However, in terms of descriptions, it was report-like in some places; you were telling more than showing. Although, this is my problem too. Overall, it's a good novel; continue with strength. By the way, if...
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    خیلی ممنون از راهنماییتون. این اولین رمانیه که مینویسم و بی تجربه هستم، اما سعی میکنم پیشرفت کنم.
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    Feedback for my first novel: The heir of truth

    If you have time and feel like trying something new, please read my novel. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1760344/the-heir-of-truth/ I look forward to your valuable feedback.
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1499700/the-last-legend-the-rise-of-destiny/ Let me mention that I plan to delete this initial version and then start publishing again after rewriting it, so your feedback would be very helpful to me.
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