Recent content by Allemite

Thank you for the feedback. The title was something that was supposed to make sense later on, but I guess it doesn't offer much at the moment. Though I feel fine with it the way it is, so I'm gonna have to decline your correction. As for the dividers, I will follow your advice. As for the...

I don't know about making a narrative sound happy, but you could try writing as if you're explaining to a friend about how your day went. I think it would sound either relaxed or eager, depending on your style. I also write in 3rd person, so I can at least say that this has worked out for me.

The one in Lord of Mysteries.

A reasonable villain, to the point where you would want to strangle the MC for being too naive to even go against them. I just enjoy reading logical thought processes, even for side characters and villains.

This is like the relationship between Nephis and Sunny from Shadow Slave, or at least I think it is.

From Chapter 1 of Everything Is Connected. Perhaps some people just love looking at the world with liquor-tinted glasses every so often, seeking a brief adventure to a parallel world brought by a mere slight change in perspective. My Facebook bio for almost a decade now. Karma is the web of...

Nice. I'll work on these, especially the cover. I haven't really given it much thought. Thank you very much. I really appreciate this.

Looking forward to the lesson. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/897062/everything-is-connected/

Looking forward to the free lesson. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/897062/everything-is-connected/

Looking forward to the free lesson. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/897062/everything-is-connected/

Perhaps It's not a big brain word by any means, but it evokes a poetic and wistful mood in me every time I read it.