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    Feedback? Here I am again after some years.

    Noted, I'll keep this in mind for a revision, thank you very much. This was insightful, thank you very much. I'll see what I can do to make the necessary revisions. Give me some time to get to your novel, been pretty busy lately.
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    Feedback? Here I am again after some years.

    It's more of an action, adventure type novel. I won't lean in too much on the LitRpg aspect and will be keeping it simple. Maybe try out the first chapter and see if it's your cup of tea? Anyway thank you! :blob_melt:
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    :blob_teary: Life's been rough lately. Thanks for the ointment ma'am :blob_melt:

    :blob_teary: Life's been rough lately. Thanks for the ointment ma'am :blob_melt:
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    Feedback? Here I am again after some years.

    Asking for feedback for this novel: First thoughts, any jarring aspects? An honest review would be fine too. If you want to swap reviews, we could. Forge Fate [LitRpg]
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    Thank you :blob_aww:

    Thank you :blob_aww:
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    All's good. I got over it, made it a learning lesson.

    All's good. I got over it, made it a learning lesson.
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    In my moment of weakness i made a mistake lol

    In my moment of weakness i made a mistake lol
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    Got into vaping lol, nothing's happened... yet. And nah, the scam's from an entirely different...

    Got into vaping lol, nothing's happened... yet. And nah, the scam's from an entirely different thing.
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    Got my heart broken twice this year, almost died twice by vehicular accidents, got scammed off...

    Got my heart broken twice this year, almost died twice by vehicular accidents, got scammed off $150, spent my birthday alone by the beach, and I feel like my lungs're f--d, but I lost 10 kgs since last year so I got that going for me.
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    Everyone's a pervert. I just choose to wear a coat instead of parading my skin. How else are...

    Everyone's a pervert. I just choose to wear a coat instead of parading my skin. How else are they going to let me near playgrounds?
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    Why does everyone think I'm a female lmao

    Why does everyone think I'm a female lmao
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    If anyone still remembers me and wonders what I've been doing, my adhd switched to some other...

    If anyone still remembers me and wonders what I've been doing, my adhd switched to some other stuff atm and... yeah, here's a song I wrote
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    Thank you <3

    Thank you <3
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    Review Swap

    Space Patroller Miya is a science fiction fantasy that—from reading the initial few chapters—has the feel of an already fully established narrative. Written in first person, the series is suitable for readers looking to jump and immerse themselves into a different world without being drawn back...
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    Review Swap

    Failed Hero's Second Chance in a Magicless World follows the story of Avery as she transmigrates (Isekai in layman's terms) from another world into our little ol' earth. There's some action in the beginning but the story ultimately turns into a slice-of-life about how a former Shero was...
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